So crit went well. Here are some pictures of part of my final presentation and some interesting points that were brought up in discussion.
-Is the bag of coffee upside down? Maybe the rectangular piece by the bottom of the bottles is the bottom of the bag, folded or rolled up and the black on the wood grain part of the table could be spilt coffee beans.
-Another interesting point is that the painting is almost like it's setting you up so that the table is angling out towards the viewer, so why are my table pieces in the same plane? In only one of my models did the lower left portion of the table project out beyond the "object" or "packet of coffee."
So all in all not a bad crit for my first crit of Advanced Studio. YAY!
Next project. We have been assigned to use the models we made for our paintings as a landscape for a building which is to borrow "Corbusian" details... yikes...
So, until next time, fair winds and following seas.
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