So I realize this is laaate, but better late then never.. right??
Crit notes/ideas were as follows:
For the Wire Model:
-Big moments and small moments but no in between moments
-Something in between thin and thick (wire)
-Lack of togetherness
For the Wax Model:
-Line as layers - used to create a wholistic experience
-Small pieces where color seeps in
Pretty pictures:
As for now, I'll be finishing work on the final model, which is almost done, I just need to add a ramp, redo the roof piece, and work on the site, wohoo! Tonight, however, is a Con/Mat night, sooooooo trying to finish the model tomorrow and start on the drawings for the final presentation.. yikes!