Drawing Without Paper Review

So I realize this is laaate, but better late then never.. right??

Crit notes/ideas were as follows:

     For the Wire Model:

          -Big moments and small moments but no in between moments

          -Something in between thin and thick (wire)

          -Lack of togetherness

     For the Wax Model:

          -Line as layers - used to create  a wholistic experience

          -Small pieces where color seeps in

Pretty pictures:

As for now, I'll be finishing work on the final model, which is almost done, I just need to add a ramp, redo the roof piece, and work on the site, wohoo!  Tonight, however, is a Con/Mat night, sooooooo trying to finish the model tomorrow and start on the drawings for the final presentation.. yikes!

A work in progress..

So far, my final model: